The
second most prestigious Academy Award should be the Best Original Screenplay
Oscar. To create a great motion picture
out of nothing is an amazing accomplishment.
There have been only five war movies that have won for Best Original
Screenplay. There have been 33 that were
nominated. The winners were: “Battleground” by Robert Pirosh (who was also
nominated for “Go for Broke!”), “Father Goose”(!) by Peter Stone and Frank
Tarloff, “Patton” by Francis Ford Coppola, “Coming Home” by Robert Jones, Waldo
Salt, and Nancy Dowd, and “The Hurt Locker” by Mark Boal (who was also
nominated for “Zero Dark Thirty”).
Adapting a screenplay is not as impressive. You already have the source material and you
turn it into a script. I’m not saying
it’s easy, I am saying that it is not as difficult. As I scanned the Academy Awards list of
nominated Adapted Screenplays they even had some plays that were converted into
movies. Are you kidding? And sometimes it was the same writer! There have been nine war movies that have won
for Adapted Screenplay (out of 34 nominees).
The winners were: “Mrs. Miniver” (inspired
by a character in newspaper columns), “Casablanca” (play), “The Best Years of Our Lives” (novel),
“From Here to Eternity” (novel), “Bridge on the River Kwai” (novel), “Judgment
at Nuremberg” (teleplay), “MASH” (novel), “Schindler’s List” (novel), “The Pianist” (memoir), and “The Imitation Game” (biography). Of these, the last two are the most impressive
because they are based on nonfiction.
Why
do I bring up this topic? Because
recently I spent an evening watching the two movies based on The Red Badge
of Courage and then read the
book again. Along with my theory that an
original screenplay is better than an adapted one, I have a belief that a movie
based on a book should be better than the book it is based on. This makes for an interesting case study
because the first movie adapted the novel’s plot and the second adopted it. The first is a very good movie so it can be
logically compared to the acclaimed novel.
I have already reviewed it here. Let’s
look at adopted first.
“The
Red Badge of Courage” (1974) is a made-for-TV picture starring Richard Thomas
(who also starred in the very underrated TV version of “All Quiet on the
Western Front”). The movie adheres more
to the plot of the novel than the 1951 Audie Murphy version. It includes several more scenes from the
novel and does not have any added scenes like in John Huston’s film. You would think that would make the screenplay
for the 1974 version better than the original because the closer you adhere to
a great novel, the better. Right? But before I take on the two screenplays, let
me make it clear that I do not believe either movie is better than Crane’s
novel. It is the rare war novel that
probably cannot be improved in a movie rendering. That is mainly because of Crane’s way with
words, which no script can match. Both
movies borrow extensively from dialogue in the book and both stick closely to
the plot. It’s a similar situation to
“All Quiet on the Western Front”.
If
you have seen Huston’s movie, be aware that the changes that the 1974 film
makes are all in the direction of the novel.
Here are a few examples. Jim
Conklin (the Tall Soldier) spreads the movement rumor, not Tom Wilson (the Loud Soldier). The main character Henry (Audie Murphy) moves on with the Tattered
Soldier after the death of Jim and eventually runs off to escape his ramblings. Their unit is taunted as it comes away from
the final battle. And the finale is
different because instead of leaving in good spirits, a general reams their
colonel for stopping their attack too soon and calls them “mud diggers”. The Thomas version adds some flashbacks that
occur in the book. Henry remembers his
mother sending him off and the girls ogling him in his uniform. (This version does manage to get some females
in – something the original did not.) It
includes a bizarre surreal scene where a general tells the cowardly Henry that
he was wise to run away. This is not in
the book, but pretty much everything else is.
If
you don’t want to read the book and still need to write a book report, watch
the 1974 movie. If you want to watch a
good war movie, watch the 1951 version.
The 1974 version is terrible. The
acting is horrible, even Thomas, who was very good in “All Quiet…”. He does not have a grip on the character and
cannot match Audie Murphy’s portrayal of the conflicted Fleming. The supporting
cast is low rent and it shows. There is
a lot of scene chewing. When Bill
Maudlin kicks your ass, it’s time to stop acting. What good is it to pull lines from the book
if you don’t have actors that can deliver them?
At least it does not have the insulting narration of the original. You would think the combat would be better,
but it is competing against John Huston and his cinematographer Harold Rosson. The cannons do recoil, so point goes to 1974
on that. And there is blood and it’s in
color. However, the combat scenes are
mediocre and played by poor actors. It
does not help to slo these dudes down.
The
script is poorly executed in the 1974 version, but it is closer to the
book. So why is the screenplay
worse. The reason is John Huston adapted
his screenplay better. He was handed a
script by Albert Band that closely conformed to the novel and Huston rewrote a
good bit of it. We’ll never know if that
just means he added some scenes because his original cut of the film has been
lost. It may have had the same scenes
that the 1974 version decided to enact.
(We do know for sure that the studio cut the scene where Henry is
walking with the Tattered Soldier.) It’s
the additions to the book that Huston put in that separate the two
scripts. Huston does not exactly tamper
with the novel (like “Full Metal Jacket” did with The Short Timers), but
he Hustonizes it. Mainly that refers to
adding some humor. Two of the most
memorable scenes in his movie are not in the book. The scene where his mates clown Wilson for
promising they would be moving up and the scene where the general promises to
have dinner that night with several units.
He shortens and tightens the monologue of the Cheery Soldier. He also makes subtle changes like having the
feisty Wilson spread the rumor instead of the sober Conklin. More importantly,
he has Fleming capture the Rebel flag instead of Wilson. I feel that these changes are improvements
over the book. He also chose (or the
studio did) to consolidate the last two attacks and omit the scene where the general berates them. The decision of the 1974 version to end with
this was perplexing, especially since the book does not end with it. I suppose you could theorize that Huston was
making his movie in the middle of the Korean War and the other was made after
the Vietnam War. Discuss.
In
conclusion, let me show some love for the adapted screenwriters - in this case, John Huston. He did not equal
the brilliance of Stephen Crane’s prose, but he did add and tweak to make
improvements on the story. On the other
hand, we have a screenplay that was too respectful of the source (and poorly
executed). It may be better as a Cliff’s
Notes version of the novel, but no one should watch the 1974 version ahead of
the 1951 version. In virtually every
parallel scene, the Huston movie is superior.
GRADE: 1974 version
= D
AGREED
ReplyDeleteThis was a super-interesting comparison. I saw the 74 movie when it came out. I've just read the book and now I'm going to check out the 51 version. Thanks for your perceptive remarks about adaptation vs. adoption.
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